nice plot, but work on a few points
1. geometry of objects, some of them just jaggers out, esp the text.
2. voice, you have a very heavy asian accent, and Engrish haha no offence.
3. movement animation, work on that, look at other stickfigure animations for ideas.
lookingforwarrd to see the next one
1. the text... yea when i first saw it, i was like ''shit the black bar is out of place.
2. because i make my voice sound like asian and english, some with deep voice, some with not so deep voice.
3. yea will do.
Keep it up! (with minor changes)
It's "Dynasty" all over again, but this time with a funny one-man-one-voice Jackie Chan type of over-dub! They all sound like the "American" businessman villain in kung-fu films. But I did like your businessman voice. If others could do it in films, why not you, in an animation? You could have tried changing your voice between characters, though, keeping the same dramatic tone and then making the story roll a bit faster. It felt kinda like a soap opera episode.
Keep up the good work! I'm sure the next installment will be even better!
the next installment WILL be better. i already tried changing voices between charactors but they still sound the same and i have edited them quite a lot of times. thats why i put subtitles so you wont be lost half way through the movie.
Here is a tip
A 9 out of 10 because this is really cool... but you need to get different voices for each characters.
in part 2, yea, i'll get more charactors to act :) thanks
Good movie, needs better sound.
Thanks man, good movie this one, even with the simple drawings :)
One critique though: You need a better mic I think as the voice is very scratchy.
keep up!
yea, you bet. thanks