Sorry, but no
Sorry to say this, but that was extrodinarily unfunny. I didn't even chuckle once. I am however giving you a 5/10 instead of blamming this because the animation wasn't half bad, and it was pretty long, so that must have taken some time to make. I recommend better voice acting, funnier dialogue, and overall rework the script a bit. You can keep the animation, because honestly that's a hell of a lot better than i'll ever be able to make. Cheers!