Reviews for Yoshi's Flutter Jump Comp

[The-Great-One]

Very Good

Your sprite work is really nice, as well as the added addition with Mario. It was quite funny and animated very well. However there are two things that bugged me a bit about this, one was the text bubbles, they were hard to read at some points. Number two was the background movement during dialogue. When a text bubble popped up the background would stop moving (I'm referring to the actual hover jumping competition). The ending seemed empty, but it wasn't bad.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Story
*Great Animation
*Superb Sound
*Very Funny

|| Bad Points ||
(none)

[kabutoowl]

This is what it needs

Try making the music have more variety.

Bomber109 responds:

It's all music from Yoshi games, since the movie takes place in Yoshi's Island. (Besides the credits, which I made myself.)

[RazorShader]

lol

pretty funny and nicely animated.
i dont get why they were running over clouds though.
and in my opinion you should let them continue their running while they were talking.
so 8/10 and 4/5

Bomber109 responds:

The "running" is called flutter jumping. It's a move Yoshi performs to sustain his height.

Try Yoshi's Island and you'll see.

Anyway, I agree. Actually, that would make animating that scene 8 times easier, so, I might as well.

[IcyDrifter]

Pretty good!

It was decent, keep up the effort!

[Zerte]

Sprites are awesome!"

I'm glad YOU too like it!" haha XD