What?
I really couldn't tell what you were going for here. The screen was so small, the artwork was so bad, and the colors were so drab that I really had no clue what was happening. The music loop was pretty bad too.
What?
I really couldn't tell what you were going for here. The screen was so small, the artwork was so bad, and the colors were so drab that I really had no clue what was happening. The music loop was pretty bad too.
You sir, need glasses!
Review time for a deserving artisit I think.
I have some postive and negative feed.
The story was clear for the most part. She was very sad and clearly did not will to live anymore, possibly because she was raped in the past or beaten or had sex with somebody... At any rate that swing she was on wasn't making her feel any better and she did herself in. All this was well and good. I liked your flashes art and I thought it wasn't animated much, but atleast there wasn't any bad animation.
I'm confused though. What does this flash have to do with Christmas? Nothing. It is about a girl who had a rough past, or maybe a rough time dealing with the past. The story just so happens to take place on New Years...
Why should this be in the Christmas collection?
Anyway. You haven't done anything wrong; the flash was good. But if you were trying to make a sad Christmas flash, or a thought provoking one, or anything with some kind of meaning then you missed or went over my head because all I see is some good art work and a lame end comment "Have a sad Christmas."
Why?
2/5
RB
PS Better luck in the future friendo.
Thanks for the long review.
great
GREAT animation and a weird but good story :P
Thanks.
A potential front-pager
Your style and originality is impressive. This is short and doesn't have much of a story, but it isn't exactly a piece of crap either...maybe somewhere in between. Well done, your movies have potential. 5/5
Thank you sir.
moving
very moving
[ kidding]
Right... why did you even bother?
I mean you have contributed awfully lot to NG.