The first two seconds of this flash sucked ...
but then the unexpected happened! It turned out to be hillarious and I would even say deeply sentimental! This is maybe even something I would consider 'artfully done' ... whatever fevered, brain sizzling ideas are going on in the crucible you like to call an brain ... I want in. Much like a herione addict craves his next toothless hooker. Thanks for the submission. Constructive criticism:
1. more fluid movements of characters, if possible
2. slightly more frantic pace
3. music was perfect, do not change it!