Bad
If your new to Flash, my advice is to just stop making sprite movies. But anyway, it was bad. It was really boring, especially with the lack of music and sounds. The story, quite simply, was terrible. Reading the dialogue outside the club and during the fight was a choir. During that time I realized that watching this anymore just wasn't worth it. Especially inside the club. That hurt my eyes. So yeah, put more time into your Flashes, some music and sound, and more improtantly, no sprites.