Hmm...
Well your sprite work wasn't that bad, believe me I've seen worse. You put the effort into your sprite work, but the storyline was a bit bland. It's different from other Mario storylines, it didn't try to copy anybody else's... it was your own material, so I respect you for that. Your next work I am really hoping will be something great.
|| Good Points ||
*Great Animation
*Great Sound
*Good Story
|| Bad Points ||
*Bit Boring