Reviews for Emo Girl

[hooplah]

Highly Underated.

Well, it's short and a LITTLE sloppy in my opinion. However, those factors do not degrade the total quality of what I just saw. You have great potential in flash, the question I want to ask you is are you ready to push forward and become great?

Now, although there was little-to-no animation, there was still a fairly interesting plot / storyline. But you need to expand on your ideas. Also, the captions were a LITTLE indistinguishable, but still readable.

Basically, never give up, Carol. This is the beginning of the road for you, and you'll only continue to get better and better, it's just a matter of how much time and effort you want to put into your future works.

I have to admit, what you have here, being your first flash is worthy of the underdog of the week given to you and perhaps one day I'll see one of your submissions listed as one of the daily top five.

I'm looking forward to watching your future creations, send me a PM when you've released something new.

Keep up the great work.

[Mindofshadow]

Very good for a first flash

a bit more work and you could probably turn this into a decent series

[tigerskinz]

pretty good

you could make emo girl into a series get a microphone for your computer and voice act (get other people to help you)

[Kelledin]

Pretty decent for a first flash

Could be some pretty entertaining subject matter, if you lengthened it a bit and gave it more plot. Most of the comments I would offer (preloader, image scaling artifacts, etc.) have been covered already. Just one last friendly nitpick: give credz to 3 Doors Down. I'm all for fair use of a three-second song excerpt, but a lot of ppl might jump down your throat for not giving credit.

[2006Neon2006]

some advice?

preloader, for one heh
you can use a NG preloader, just search for em on the site or ask in the forums where theyre found, im not too sure myself

also, making sure the images fit the stage, it just looks better but theres no mistake black edges, because the images were too thin

its all about appearance, not bad for a first try, bit more of a plot would of helped, but good none the less