.......lol
i didnt even watch the first 5 seconds...bravo....i was so bored...even for a fat guy who goes on newgrounds all day...i only gave it a 10 because i thoguht it looked good...for the first 3 seconds....
i suggest more excitement and give it a better colour scheme..like if i called it "girlfriend dumped ownage" i would havel ike 100000 hits lol. more modern day drama pleeeeaze. thanks u
Mellow dramatic
It was okay - howether, I reckon it needs less of an 'anime' kind of style to it, sorry!
More umph to it please
good but a bit of a rip off
I liked the backgrounds, however it has got the music from "howl's moving castle" and is an obvious mixture of Hayao miyazaki's other movies. If you gave him some credit it would be nice : ) .
however I don't want to be an ass so... I think u did a great work. keep it up mate
Nicely Done.
The first thing I noticed was how in the opening shot you effectively conveyed that the man and the train were both walking in the same direction at different speeds without using any foregrounds or backgrounds to indicate this. That is something very difficult to do, and you did it perfectly.
The illustrations had two distinct styles, both of which were well done and complimented each other pleasantly.
You created an atmosphere and captivating story without any spoken words or reliance of violence or foul comedy.
Keep it going. Well Done.
HOLY SH**!!
That was awsome!!! How did you Make that!?!?!?!?!