Thanks, jerk!
You ruined my childhood memories of happiness! Those were the only ones I had left!
I need to go cut my self...
Reviews for "The Legend of David 1"
Wow
I have to say that was a superb flash
(Yeah, you helped m eget first level of Ocarina of Time%u2122)
Thanks
rofl!
My god this is funny! At first i though it was gonna be crap, but it turned out great!
I love his voice, it sounds...so...stupid! Its so funny!
Suggestions:
1) First um all of your i's are lowercase so you might wanna make them into I's and capitalize them.
2) You should pick a more interesting name because a great series deserves a great name!
oh no..
man i liked the tree... why'd it have to die?
WARNING: SPOILERS!!!
So this is basically what ocarina of time would be like if the main character was rejected from remediate school for being a disruptive influence on the rest of the class and a major headache for the teacher? Feels like it's been done before... tell me, did you actually enjoy "Date Movie", "Epic Movie", "Hero Movie" and all those other films with "Movie" in the title? Because if you do I can understand how you thought this might be funny.
I personally don't like those "Movie" movies because I can actually feel my IQ plummet so fast while watching them that I end up vomiting due to a severe onset of vertigo. Same thing happened while watching this animation.
It seems that you were attempting to rely heavily on David's severe retardation for comedy but failed miserably and ended up just telling the first part of "Ocarina of time" instead. Only deviating from it to show jokes that we could see coming from miles away which would have been funnier if the animation was just slightly smoother like the where he hits the twat with the red fairy, without the bit where he cracks his knuckles winds up and then hits him might have made me laugh if it was just David looking blankly at him then switching straight to the punch (also, and this is a really minor thing I noticed, David DID have a sword and a shield in his closet).
I wouldn't have minded it so much if David was consistantly retarded, I mean at the beginning he nearly drowned in his cereal but when he got into the Deku Tree he suddenly got a sense of self preservation, learned to read, and afterwards realised everything he did was completely pointless, that really doesn't make much sense does it?
Apart from that, like GL-Briton said, it really needs more jokes and better pacing. The animation could be smoother and the art could use some improvement which will come in time, but I wouldn't have particularly cared about those points if it had a decent script and voice-acting. Unfortunately it had none of the above. It comes off as another unoriginal spoof attempting to play off the popularity of the game rather than any other kind of merit.
One last question: How do you decide how a joke is good enough to put in your script? Do you just think of something and go "that'll do" or do you actually laugh at the jokes you make up? For me I would have to laugh at the jokes I make up because how the hell could I expect other people to laugh at them if I couldn't?