Looks good but....
As you mentioned, your syncing is a bit off, and that really became a problem in the subtitled bits. It could definetly better, but would be just fine if you managed to get the syncing right.
Looks good but....
As you mentioned, your syncing is a bit off, and that really became a problem in the subtitled bits. It could definetly better, but would be just fine if you managed to get the syncing right.
Well thanks for the advice. Don't forget that this is my first flash movie, so my later ones will be MUCH better.
Overall, good.
I like your storyline and ideas. The animation wasn't bad either. The audio seemed to get off from time to time, judging from the mouth movements.
not too bad
better than the usual crap! work on the syncronization and timings ; also, check that your subtitles diplay totally and in a good color, some are barely readable.
work a bit on the scenario too.
it's not that bad!
haha thanks. I wanted to bring something new to Newgrounds, and this is the result. The later movies will be better for sure!
You wah fortune cookeh??
Good script and okay art. The lip-synching is totally off, though.
No shit sherlock. I posted it in the description