Hmmmmm.
Where to start and what to say.. It has potential. Sadly that potential is drowning in the massive pile of spelling and grammatical errors, plot holes, and cut and paste scenery from other games. I think I spotted 6 in all, Super Mario 3, Super Mario RPG, and Earthbound right off the bat. Taking someone else's idea, (i.e Super Mario RPG with the seven stars/shards) cut a pasting scenery, and music together is an okay way to start an idea for a flash. But then you have to change it, augment it in such a way to make it your own. You almost followed the exact storyline from a couple games I used to play back in my Super Nintendo days. Almost exact, right down to the massive plot holes they had too, throwing some random people into this world quest with shady characters and serious overtones of senseless duty. What purpose if any would this group of people have to go off based solely on some dream to go save the world/ find the shards? If it was intended to be a spoof of some kind it might have made more sense and had more appeal. Though I honestly believe you intended it to be an original idea. I can say this because you actually spent time to animate it and the animation was decent. Come to think of it, since you took to time to animate it with earnest I'm bumping your score from 3 - 6 given a lot of people don't even animate their work.