Reviews for Ultra Pivot Ownage 2

[JeremieCompNerd]

No way.

Sorry, but no way. The events in the show had next to nothing to do with eachother, it had a low framerate, not much detail, and with no loading screen it kept freezing on me while I waited for the next few screens to load. I'm sorry, and I realize this is one of your first works, but you need to look at some of the things that have already made it as great pivots and emulate their techniques. Add a background, a preloader, improve the framerate, add more detail and something resembling a story, then resubmit and gloat over your victory. I really think this can be improved in many ways before it is considered a finished project. Please take all of this as constructive criticism and don't hate me for saying what needs to be said.

GoldbloodedDragon responds:

I barely wanted to respond to this.

-EDIT-

"Sorry, but no way."
-Here we go...

"The events in the show had next to nothing to do with each other,"
-It's a collection, dude.

", it had a low frame rate, "
-Well, most people use 21 FPS, I don't know about you...

"not much detail,"
-This is Pivot. Not Flash.

", and with no loading screen it kept freezing on me while I waited for the next few screens to load"
-Again, this is Pivot, not Flash.

"I'm sorry, and I realize this is one of your first works,"
-Way to point out the obvious.

"but you need to look at some of the things that have already made it as great pivots and emulate their techniques."
-They have their techniques, and I have mine.

". Add a background, a preloader, improve the framerate, add more detail and something resembling a story,"
-Background, Something smart for once. A preloader, see sarcastic Remark #4. Detail, see sarcastic remark #4. Story, see sarcastic remark #2.

"then resubmit and gloat over your victory."
-See what I just said.

"I really think this can be improved in many ways before it is considered a finished project."
-I really DON'T think it does.

"Please take all of this as constructive criticism and don't hate me for saying what needs to be said."
-You are WAAAAYYY too late.

Ha, ha, ha.

[ghostflames]

Sorry, but...

Its these kinds of crappy pivots that give pivot a bad name, i pivot too, but mine are somewhat decent, im currently an intermediate, soz, but eaven if u dont look at the animation, the humor is the one thing that makes the rest of the score points and unfortunatly most of the ideas are stolen from youtube videos like sticks on crack i remember seeing those before... so... soz neither the animation, neither the ideas... 5 for the effort, cuz i dont wanna be an asshole, it might not be good, but u still worked hard to make it :)

GoldbloodedDragon responds:

Yes. I did work hard to make it. I got INSPIRATION from one of them, but not from STOC. I made it myself, but I just REmade it. There is a BIG defference.

[tjubos]

Mighy, but

a preloader could've helped, had to load the flash 3 times... Very creative, something like a hand of god...

People think this review is useless.

GoldbloodedDragon responds:

Thanks for the review! Have a nice day!

[BigMadMentalAndy]

Short But Sweet

good fun to watch, not bad at all for your second flash, maybe if you added some audio to the people then it would be more effective. but apart from that was great fun to watch *clicks movie link again*.

GoldbloodedDragon responds:

Wow, thanks! It seems this is doing much better than my first! have a nice day!

[EivindB]

Ownage!

That was some incredibly cool stick animation, short, but that's what makes it so good. it needs something more to get 10 , but it's absolutely good!

GoldbloodedDragon responds:

That something is flash. I used a converter to make this. 9? Wow! Have a nice day!