so funny =)
so funny =)
it was pretty good
very very nice
just going to start this off with saiding im a director and i noticed a few things about this flash that would have made it better try using these for next time.
1. in the jungle scene where it was two years later, you should have given luigi a full beard to show the audience how long he has actually been there in the jungle, just little things like that can change the whole scene around. if you used sprites just add on to them
2. try to aviod unessasary scenes like when luigi was holding up the gun at toad
3. try the FPS rate fast at maybe 30 to keep it at a fast pace
im going to finish with saying that this is a very good first flash better than mine was and i think you have a future in animation, for your next episode try to add in voice acting if you want help on how to do that just PM me good stuff
Brendon Director of Film and Animation
it glitches up when he says
i know i havent in invation and it keeps repeating
Me gustaba mucho tu obra.
The standards on this site would probably warrant a lower score because of the quality of the flash, but due to the fact that this is your first piece of flash submitted to the site, I'll give you a higher rating based on effort and consideration. Honestly, Newgrounds gets a lot of crap these days, but this doesn't deserve to be lumped in with the rest of them. Obviously, you've taken great care to make a decent flash, and it shows. The polished art style, the humorous plot, the animation even, all of it shows consideration to the viewer and gives off the impression that you must be tired with the low quality of flashes these days also. I liked your sense of humor, too -- it showed originality, if not more consideration for the viewer (I personally loved the 'wrong scene' and the cameo of the final scene as well.) by selecting what type of humor should go where.
Of course, the animation isn't as smooth as it should be, but for your first flash on the site, it's acceptable. I can only hope you continue to make even more flashes, since this obviously shows you have talent (and the viewer in mind.)
(Voy a presumir que hablas espanol. He notado que las lineas en la animacion fueron de mal gramatica, pero fue un buen atento a la idioma ingles. Yo se que no es facil de entender, pero si necesitas alguien para transladar tus escrituras, comunicate conmigo por mensaje. Espanol es mi segunda idioma, pero lo hablo bastante bueno, y por la razon que hablo ingles mejor, creo que puedo ayudarte en ese aspecto, por lo menos. No puedo ayudarte en animar mejor, desafortunadamente, porque no se hacer animacion, ni siquiera dibujar. Si no entiendo algo, por eso tengo el Internet. :P) Just putting that out there.
Thanks a lot for the comments. The first i can say is sorry for the crappy dialogues but when i made this flash i didn't know much english. But actually i can say the next aniamtion will be better.
I spend three months in this animation and actually i'm very busy with my study but on the holidays i'll work hard in the next episode.