These other people know nothing
I thought it was actually quite good, and a very interesting take on the whole war for the portal/madness idea.
To those who are upset that Hank died: When did any one character ever gain immunity from death? Isn't the whole idea of newgrounds "everything, by everyone?" For those that aren't 13 and/or have been viewing this website for three days, you would know this.
My only beef with this is the voice acting. There's absolutely no dramatic inflection or intonation. I really think this could benefit from having someone else with a little more talent doing the voice-over.