Great start/end!
i really like how you ended the flash the same way you started. helped tie it together and such. another thing i liked about it was the rainbows! friggin schweet.
keep up the good work. 5/5
Reviews for "experimental flash finish"
really enjoyed
I thought that this was really cool. The animation was pretty good and the music fit in well. The only thing I would change is some of the transitions of the colors and shapes. What I mean by that is like when a red line turned into a green and the tree grew out of it, you could have made the color transition a little more smoother than just having it change colors. Good job
wow
that was really creative and very interesting to watch
It's finished, l know, but it needs work.
The part where the apples fall from the tree and the tree blow up? The apples stay in mid-air and the tree repeats the blowing-up thing. The animation needs to be a bit smoother, with cleaner lines. I don't mean to be rude, but for the finished version, this was a real let-down.
Enlightener57 responds:
The apples were supposed to stay there and you shouldnt vote a 0 because thats not judging it. Thats saying, look i don't know how to give advice and because i can't do a better flash i going to give you a zero. Not cool man.
Great flash.
That was really good. I especially liked the bit with the tree. Keep up the good work.