good
but try to make the story more interesting and more battles
oh and a boss or something
good
but try to make the story more interesting and more battles
oh and a boss or something
Wow
For your first flash, not that bad. In fact, I think the storyline is good so far. As someone mentioned, Kirby is the hero. Maybe Mario should run into him along the way...
Waow ! Pretty good but
Try to avoid always the same battle scene, make more time (but in 2 days you can't make more :p) and your next flash movie will be awesome ! I gave you a 9 for those little things !
I am planning to add much more battle scenes in second movie, that is for sure. Thanks for suggestion.
The Story Line looks great except for one thing...
Doesn't Dream Land already have a hero or something? He's pink and round and he can copy his enemies abilities by absorbing them. Oh and his name is Kirby. But it's your story and you didn't sleep for two days, so I guess its alright
combination
it looks like mario was combined with a ninja...warrior and a guy from dbz......