FrozenSheep-10 Stars
That you deserve, another really well made flash, i enjoyed it ^_^, i couldnt suggest anything to improve them rather than length. Im sure i speak for everyone when i say "we want more"!
Reviews for "Appleville Ep 1"
mmm...
Reminds of the Nameless series oh well still liked it.
You make me laugh
A very silly cartoon.
It reminds of me early Nameless cartoons. And look how huge they are now!!
That could be you!
As I promised, I made a list of all of the subtle randomness that I love in this movie. There are few real jokes in this, all of the rest of them are just things happening. Things that most people notice, but possibly not everyone.
They are all cronological and whatnot.
-Subtitles don't match fully
-Shrinks as he goes down stairs. A common mistake when animating, but you did it very cleverly, and intentionally
-Red dude randomly gets hair and a hat
-Red dude's arms disappear, then kind of fly away
-Pinapple's flashback noises *whooshwooshwoosh*
-Pinapple suddenly has the "job shirt"
-Red dude's face keeps changing
-Red does a crab walk onto scene, and pinapple snail crawls. I loved that part :D
-When red walks away, you make the corniest no leg walk animation ever, and it was funny
-Firemahn
-Pinapple flashes on and off screen randomly
-Pinapple's leaf things are suddenly way more detailed, just like your old pinapple logo
-The singing dudes silouhette mimicker thing is often doing the wrong thing, or falling behind the real dude. I think that was actually my favorite part.
He should return to the series, but with real lines, not just singing. Always with that shadow guy and such
Anyways. I made that list just because I said I would.
Very awesome cartoon.
It has great humor and timing. As others have said, the pacing was a little shaky. But I'm sure this series will turn into something much more.
Maybe get some voice actors on board too
FrozenSheep responds:
I was fairly influenced by nameless during the whole thing. Though I'd doubt I can reach nameless-esque stardom here or even come close. I'll aim low for now.
;D
Fantastic
Great style.
Keep on keeping on.
lol
i actually accidentally voted 5 when i wanted 4 but hey your lucky hehe, loved the randomness of this movie, and the dryness of the comedy