Delicious
It had been a while since I talked to you, and I was on Newgrounds because some asshole linked me to something that sucked. It came to mind that it had been a long time since part 3 of this was done, so I decided to take a peek. Lo and behold there was indeed something waiting for me and the only thing that pisses me off is that it ended.
I want more.
Better voice work is all you need.
I love the art style, and the animation is very smooth. You could stand to put a little entertainment on the preloader, though, and a better microphone would definitely help.
Also, I found you through the SheezyArt Animation Club. :)
I thought about putting some more stuff in the preloader but I wanted to keep it relatively blank just for consistencies sake
intresting
The style was good it fit the mood of the flash and it was narrated pretty good but the acting needs to improve but none the less it was still entertaining
thanx :)
wow
i like the dramatic effect of the voice over the only problem was that i could barely understand the words, but that could be my one computer.
It could also be my mic. I'll try my best to make the audio as clear as it can be for the next one
reminded me of the max
sorta interesting. Your voice sometimes sounded more "white kid suburbia trying hard" in a few areas. Which was killing the mood for me. Plot seemed to be heavily inspired by "The Maxx" and "Spawn" with the massive killing and nihilistic characters. all in all, it was pretty good though.
I loved the maxx for its great artwork and spawn was something my friends were really into that I barely remember. glad you like it tho