not original at all
dude, that was pretty much the grudge, like you almost took exact scenes from it. next time be original please, and make it have an actual story, this one just seemed like dora the explorer. oh ill go over here i hope nothing bad happens, i mean seriously put some thought into it. Were you watching the grudge and then went straight to watching dora after to make you feel better? sorry fro being harsh but please next time be original, and maybe a bit less jerky, yah gotta make it flow bro.