Poor Jill XD
Un trabajo bien hecho XD
Poor Jill XD
Un trabajo bien hecho XD
Hmm
Didnt really get it. Good animations tho.
don't know what you have agenst her but
I like it XD
needs a lot of work
1. You need to color the drawings, don't leave it black & white
2. No sounds, no songs, no nothing!
3. Make it easier to read text, don't just scribble
4. Add more information in your comments
that's it
~Ninjakoopa-33
Hm...
The Graphics were nice, perhaps it would be a bit better with Color, or sound.
Not bad for a first flash though.
With a few improvements, it wouldn't be that bad =D