Wow :D
I can see that A LOT of effort was put into this flash. the graphics are good, the storyline is interesting, and the music is also good. one thing i think you should work on is the voices, im not saying they're bad but maybe you could tone down the empty sound in the background, and make the voices more...interesting, more into it, if you know what i mean.
overall good job. im voting 5 to save this flash.
Thanks. I plan to improve the voices in future episodes and get a better mic, the built in mic on my computer doesn't sound to clear. (There's a buzzing machine in my basement probably creating the 'empty sound'. Otherwise it's usually the quietest room, but I'll find a better place.)
Pretty good store you got there..
I liked the story, seemed you have good ideas, the art wasn't half bad either, but the voice acting was pretty bad at times. Some times is was good, but some times it sounds like someone reading an oral report at school or something. Needs more emotion.
It's beautiful
But you REALLY need some good voice actors. The ones on here take away from the stunning art.
<3 Sapphire
Not bad
Few things though, you put too much on the mouth's and the Voice for the Main Character had no emotion, it sounded like he was reading off a paper and not paying attention to anything.
The story is great, and makes me want to watch the next one. You also did very good graphics wise.
Clean up the arms, work on the Mouths, and fix the voices, and this could be a great flash!
Overall, a 4/5 and 8/10 =)
Thanks for the helpful comments. Also responding to the others who brought this up: my voice acting needs work, all I can say is it'll improve with time.
Aha
I enjoyed it
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