hm..
work on graphics..
at first i thought the rain are falling stars, and if you look at the shadow while the fire is burning: it is placed wrong.
the music to this flash was good but it seems like you don't know how to give credit to the audio author correctly.. maybe you need to take a look at the upload options.
not bad
i thought it was kinda nice. it was interesting. I base my point system on something new. points 1-5 and based on animation and how good the sound effects and other crap is. 6-10 are based on story line. this gets a 2/5 on animation, manely because it was a little rusty. story line gets a 2/5 as well. but this was better then a 4 so i gave it a 1 point leeway. this was not to bad. this is god, out.
bit empty but nice
Pretty good animation, liked details like the smoke but did feel that it had places to go.. that it didn't
thanks
OMG! LOL!
arrow pointing right hes walking left ? lol.....come dude atleast try and make some sense out of it.
different camera angle.
Not very good.
I didn't like this very much, you should really take your time with the art, it was terrible. The animation was choppy, smooth it out a bit. The music was well picked, but stick figures and bad animation ruined it.
Try harder next time on the art and animation. For example, the fire was two frames. I'd suggest going more in depth on that. And just a little opinion here, don't get too caught up in stick figures. If you really want to get quite good, practice with sticks, but try full bodies. It's much more challenging, but more rewarding.
In this case, work harder on the art and animation, 3/10
-KDF