Very not bad
Good job kid. It was pretty good by my standards, which are pretty low, but I still liked it.
Very not bad
Good job kid. It was pretty good by my standards, which are pretty low, but I still liked it.
Pretty Cool
You have pretty good animation and drawing skills even though you get lazy at some points. Here are the things you did best and need to work on:
- Work on your backrounds. They are much too bland.
- When you did the 1st person view that was AWESOME - very cool and very good job... do more of that
- Your hero seems to be able to run foward into oncoming fire... and they are shooting him for like 5-10 secs at least while he's running straight at them without one bullet hitting. Make this more realistic - either show him somehow awesomely dodging the bullets or don't have him run straight into fire. But whatever you do - don't make it so unrealistic that you just show him running into fire and the enemy missing. That's lame.
- You had alot of good ideas to keep the flash interesting. The grenades, the first person view, the alleyway, everything else. Very innovative. Keep doing that.
The one question I have for you is, will there be a plot? Just wondering.
Mostly good
I can tell you really improved during the creation of this project :]
I think the menus are excellently done, I know an odd thing to say but I think they look really professional, also your timing as a 'director' was spot on, you picked really good scenes to draw.
One think I do want to mention, I think you should practise your character proportions as well as maybe looking into anatomy since you had the main bits correct, but some areas (like the chest) were a little out of proportion.
Animation was pretty smooth and well thought though. You managed to keep me entertained during what was essentially a 5 minute fight scene (didn't count) by using lots of different camera angles, so hats off to you, well done and I hope to see work from you in the future :D
Pretty Decent, but Stupidly unrealistic.
the movie itself was pretty good, but the fact of a guy with two 6 bullet guns which he didn't reload quite enough, owning an army of soldiers with semi-automatic guns in an open area just made absolutely no sense.
Otherwise, great movie, I'll be looking forward to part two to see why the hell that was happening anyway.
-Zyst.
good
but hes carring revolvers not once did he reload