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Reviews for "DJ Dela - Bleed (WIP)"

This is easily one of the sickest beats I've ever heard!

Yeah, the break is a little bit odd; it certainly is good, but it seems to interrupt. I think it should be at the beginning of the song, and then transition to the main beat.

Regardless, this is awesome and I'd love to have a longer version of the main beat. Keep up the good work!

DJDela responds:

The break is going to be improved along with everything else in the song, cause I have a feeling that it ruins the beat and is not a good connection between the intro and the main part.
Thanks for the review.

The song is very good, see this video, 0:28 :F

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NtAZQ5 z7D1A

Good Song

DJDela responds:

I know, I've seen the video, thanks for the like. :)
The song is not finished yet, but I will make it a lot better than it is right now.

Pretty good I think

Well the build up is kind of dull but I like how it gets to sounding cooler a few seconds later though so it all works out I think. The song itself is very nice on the ears and I like how it just seems to get you pretty much pumped up and ready to sweat and party all night as well too I think. Calming then dancing!!

The synth sounds really awesome and makes me think it's just one really long synth solo the whole time as well which works out well too. The secondary synth gives a siren like feel like you are being alerted that it is time to get on the dance floor and partaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!

The liquid bass is really cool here as well and I like how it works out too. The drums are cool and very simple as well so nice work there.

Overall, great party song.

Review Request Club

DJDela responds:

Now, the only thing we need is a party. :P
The build up will be fixed, because it is dull, really.

Thank you for this great review.

Simple and shweet

This song like many of your others, is done pretty nicely!
I really enjoyed the drum work, and most of your house builds we're really nicely put together. The break 2:05 reminded me of older Wolfgang Gartner stuff!
Everything seems to be decently mixed, nothing sounds too bogged down, and everything sounds pretty clear. Nice job!

Things I would have done differently;
- Your patterns are pretty spot on, but I wasn't too in love with every instrument you chose (definitely try layering your lead/ bass samples a bit more for fullness)
- Some instruments seemed to sound really well Eq'd while others didn't (your clap at the intro for example)
- The build at 1:30-2:00 was slightly confusing, and a bit repetitive (Try working with this a bit, you're really close)

Overall, very solid submission!
Nice work Dela; This is the type of sht I like to hear man
~Dj Sonik

-Review Request Club-

DJDela responds:

Yeah, I know the build up sucks, it's just lack of ideas.
There is much work to be done here, actually the funny part is that I didn't spend more than two hours on this.

What's wrong with the clap?
Too loud? Needs reverb? Or maybe I should use a different clap?

The bass lead didn't quite turn out as expected, I am having a few issues with NI Massive, but never mind that.

Thank you for reviewing, and I'm glad you liked it.

i like

good track mate good house shit and the break fits. track could definitely use some vocals tho. im startin to make vocals for tracks so i might make some for this

DJDela responds:

Thanks for the comment man.
I don't how would vocals fit in this track though.
Anyway, I was thinking of saving the full version of this song for some future release perhaps.
Like I said, I only posted this wip to see what people think of it now.
But, if you feel that the vocals would go well, then I don't mind, you can try to make something. :)