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The characters are cool, the story line was OK; but it was so slow that it didn't present well. I still give it an 8 because I liked it. Keep it up!
Reviews for "Big Head Bicycle Blunder"
Good
Very slow... needs to be faster it gets kinda boring i don't need time to see EVERTYHING in the background.... Good parts are the jokes in the movie which are pretty funny the animation isn't the greatest but really does get the job done... overall i'd say this is a 7 just bc it's not too short not too long but a little too slow good job tho!
Hey, this is a nice flash...
...and I like it!
Here's what I think needs some improvement. The art is simple and easy, but I seem to see some inconsistency with your drawing. The pace of the movement (whether it be character movement or cameral movement etc) is a bit slow for my taste. Did you make the flash at 15 fps?
Overall, I've got no complaints on this flash, could do with a little improvement though. Keep up the good work bro!
Stuff you need to work on
The story was cool, and the art'n'animation were cool and all, considering you dont practice much. so my advice is...do that
practice alot, you gotta get to know the feel on timing and how to control the speed of animation, cuz the car hitting the bike was lowspeed and ddnt have the momentum to throw him as much as it did. and the storyline got abit boring at times cuz it was too slowly animated.
Btw i like the way he dresses, lol, keep up the good work.
yawn
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too slow, literally, the characters move so slow its painful to watch, and theres no voices and little sound effects, so it gets really dull at times. The humor was ok, but im giving pretty much all my 7 points to how funny and unexpected that clown appearing was, if you could make the whole movie that fast and comical then i could give you a 10