To be fair, I was not expecting much. Animation looked ridged and awkward. And the voices was strange to say the least. But where you lacked in Noise work and Animation you made up for very well with Charm and Humour. This, is a hell of a lot funnier than most other work on NG, and despite the flaws I pointed out, this could very well have been a Valve written piece.
Good job :D
5/10 Is average, not 9/10