Ok so here's what I have to say;
not very much is going on at any one time, I din't feel that essence of being surrounded by the music, because there isn't much music there. I think you need to layer it more and maybe at a main instrument that plays almost 80% of the song as that anchor for the song to grow out from. That being said the score is pretty good because if you added those things I thinkthe song would potentially be perfect.