Lacks
It really lacks a "back" button...
Reviews for "newbie button tutorial"
Good EFFORT!
Seems like a good tutorial. Looks like you put your heart into, you'll probably get through judgment. I bet you will. I thought it was decent. Could of made some examples for the flash or something.
not bad but..
Although it is a very detailed tutorial the amount of text on screen makes it harder to take it all in.
I think if you structured it a bit better (so there isn't as much text on screen all at once) and prehaps used more images to explain things it would be alot easier to understand.
Aside from that not bad dude.
tldr
too much text, too little pictures, i'm sure it contains valid informations and such, but its not quite thrilling to read...
maybe you could add some animations, to examplify or acompany the text
or add some speech..
and improve on the layout, its simple white text, on a black background..
all in all, not thrilling,
this is well presented...
continue to make these, so there'll be better stuff out there. unlike those madness combat noob ones...