great awesome you're the god of the techno
aw wait it's a trance XD well i don't hear a remix from you in years and this one was the most awesome remix from you and what i hear in this year in all the music portal
Reviews for "Music Box (remix)"
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cheshyre responds:
Thank you!! Smiles for everyone!
Cool twist on trance
The drums in the intro make up a melody on their own, distorted, and somewhat danceable. Though the synth that comes in every idk, 5-8 seconds in the beginning, I don't like it's tone, I imagine something saw-ier, or more distorted, at least at the begining, then maybe growing cleaner as it progresses, that might even make the transition smoother at 1:36. But you made the song so you'd know best what works, it's just my opinion anyway.
The piano melodies were very pretty.
I found it very refreshing as a trance song, would be awesome to see people dance to it. With all the claps in the intro, maybe change the ones that sound panned to the right, or make them quieter, and more consistent, it'd probably make the intro sound more structured to people.
Anyway I got kinda picky and think most of what I said might not be coherent or I explained it wierd. It's just opinions/thoughts/ideas I had while listening.
-stratkat
cheshyre responds:
No no, your suggestions made perfect sense as I read them and are really good ideas! I'll keep them in mind for the next trance-ish song I try. Thanks for the 9 and for the great advice!! Hopefully I'll just get better and better...
Great!
Initially I thought it was bullshit but I was wrong, nice!
cheshyre responds:
!! I'm glad you didn't think it was bullshit and gave it a ten! Thanks!!
Music box
The song was really repetitive, the intro was really good with all those crazy drums banging the track very nicely but from there until 2:00 it's pretty much the same thing and it makes a slight change on the track by adding that string break. That break was the best part from the whole track , it actually revived the track. Even though that synth is making the same melody and i know that maybe is that melody you refer on your description but i think you could make some variation like invert the melody or something, that break showed your composition skills and it shows that you can make a really nice song. The rest of the song is good , i didn't see anything wrong with it.
It's nice but it could be better, I have heard your other tracks before and you are awesome
Ruben-Acid Paradox-
cheshyre responds:
I agree with you almost 100 percent. It was a challenge to make this song interesting. I really wanted that melody in a song and I thought I could do it justice. I think it will be somewhat controversial but I gave it my best. Thanks for the honesty and for the 7!!