I think it drags on a bit long.
And it's not really trace so much as electronica or industrial :3 this is rather BUMPIN. but yeah, i think the main progression should start less complex and become more layered over time. It gets a lot better after a good minute or so though so I'll give you props for that :) you just gotta work on structure.
Word! Thanks for the 8 and for the great advice! I appreciate it!
awesome :D
oo where do you get that cool construction-like sound throughout the piece?
That's just a combination of 4 or 5 snares with some effects and stuff on them. I'm glad you like it!! Thanks!!
I don't know what it is....
It seems to be lacking something, or maybe it's just too much of something. I can't get with it but I can't put my finger on exactly what's wrong. 2/5 and 4/10
Wish I could be more help.
I know what you mean.... It IS missing something but I'm not sure what to do to it. Oh well, thanks for trying!
This is absolutely sick!
Such a nice sound to it. The whole thing fits together so nicely, and the bassline is great!
Thank you very much!!!!!!!
Sweet and Dynamic!!
I really liked this. My mother used this melody as a lulaby..
so I am familiar with the main tone and your work brings a nostalgic feeling!
Excelent work!! I loved how you used the tone and how you evolved it!!
10/10!!
I would just like it If you credit the original music. The fact is that I am searching the original song and have no clue about it's name xD
Thank you!!! That's awesome that you recognize the melody. I tried to find the tune also but I can't find it anywhere!! Let me know if you have better luck