stop writing overly critical reviews!!!!!
this was an awesome story and your drawings were amazing. i dont think it had to be longer because the message got through to me. but i found the end kind of depressing because its like your saying that you cant fix a messed up life, that you have to run away and leave it behind.
oh yea and what KALK said about the camera angles being a stretch at the begining... you have to remember that he accually HAD camera angles unlike most flashes on newgrounds.
anyway one of the best flashes on newgrounds.
OVERALL NOICE! XD