Looks like a piece of practice work
This is most likely something that should get better as you continue to develop your drawing skills.
Not that it isn't better than average already, it still lacks the outright awesomeness of some of the better artists.
YAY
THIS IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!
Nice
This series looks really promising, I'm goin to watch it! :3
Unfortunate response...
I give a ten to the commercial, but unfortunately I preferred the preview over the actual series.
The voice acting overall was pretty well done, and improved as the series went on.
The animation was above average, but could have been done a little better.
(To noobs who flame critics there's a difference between drawing and animating)
The art was nice and the story showed real promise, but it really didn't work sometimes during the "serious" moments that turned the plot, mainly that mugging scene in Secret.
It was still a well done series minus some small issues considering it was done out of someones bedroom or living room. I'd really like to see another series by you but with a less serious tone, you seem to be able to animate cartoony style animation better as seen from your AGG logo intro.
^ ^
Hooray for Violence!