Clingy animation but wonderful music.
Animation: The animation was clingy and not very interesting. Your art skills were if I must say at a fair level. 5/10
Music/Sound: The music gave a nice sense of adventure to the flash. The sound effects were not to bad and the voices werent as awful as you said it was quite well done. Though you should get a better mic. 8/10
Plot: Pretty usual for an anime. Needs better writng except for the end that part I liked. 7/10