Great work.
It was kind of missing out on something I felt like somewhere in there you could have crammed some narration in there. It would of been more interesting. You have some good art skills in there. But really the point of that was to show off your goodness! So I had to give you an 8 out of 10. Because your making me jealous! I wanna be good at flash animating but as of now I have no skills in Flash CS3 right now.