Definitely some Potential
I would be interested in hearin the final product of this song, The beginning wasn't all that interesting, but I kept listening and that melody really carried me through the song, It makes the song a lot more moving, dramatic, puts more feeling into it, but I also feels like it needs a little bell sound or a pluck, or a harp, or a lead version of the two to put even more to it, backing it up.
Definitely love it.
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