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very cool job well done but spelling errors but 5 out of 5 if your going to make a next flash spent a few month making it
Reviews for "Wrath ofShadow ep. 6.2"
Shi-Gu responds:
Of course, I will take my usual two months :D
Like it!
but where are all the other episodes? I tried searching? I really like this movie and I ussually dont like sprites but I liked this one.
Shi-Gu responds:
well, just look for wrath of shadow, it's not so hard to find, if you can't, go to my userpage, they are all there ;)
It was just alright.
While it is apparent that you spent time creating this movie, it's also apparent that you could have spent a little more. It's unpolished and there are quite a few things that could be improved to make it more enjoyable to watch.
-Sprite Animation
-Spelling (this is a big one, there were tons of spelling errors)
-Use punctuation! It makes text-based dialogue a lot more interesting.
-Storyline
As far as the storyline portion, you need to let us know a little bit more about what's going on. One of the characters said something to the effect of "I cleansed it in someway" and that was just too vague. If everything happens just "somehow", it's a lot less creative and a lot less interesting. Another instance where this happened was when Zero forced Okiname (sp?) out of his body. Just expand on those ideas a bit so we know what's going on.
Technical Issues:
The 'Play All' button does not work.
Putting in scrollable text (using buttons or, perhaps, the spacebar?) would add to the continuity a lot since the viewer could read the text at his or her own pace.
Shi-Gu responds:
Well, I will try to put in prectice all that you said and I will repair everything I can
Very well done!
But the text speech ran too long on the before they did anything. Besides that it was a very nice flash.
Shi-Gu responds:
Thanks
cool
but wheres shadow
Shi-Gu responds:
Doing his stuff, don't worry, next episodes will be dedicated just to him