that was almost really good...
the only thing is... your acting sucked... seriously, the voices sounded SO bored by the whole thing. when you're reading your lines into the microphone, make them sappy and over the top. you'll feel stupid, but it will make your characters more believable! yet, i can't only criticize you... because this was an amazing movie! a good plot, a thought-provoking twist ending, good animation, great music selection... SO close to being perfect... find people who can really belt it out for you on the lines.