Awesome!
That was Wicked Funny!it was like a Crazyer-fast paced Block Head Animation.
Reviews for "*Hyperanimation! Pilot"
It was just okay...
Good start though!
i liked although...
...... Ross-Irving is right even if you cant do flash doesnt mean yoiu cant critacise plus most users are idiots and would probably give him stick for that comment but he is right even i when i started reading his comment wanted to have ago...(omg ur just jealous hes better then you blallabahllahlalglal.... but i realised he was right nice flash voice acting good but the sound wasnt of good quality a good idea and it would have been funny but the way you presented it wasnt as good as other comedians ive seen you get a 8
HATE TO SAY IT
but i completely agree with ross-Irving.... this seemed pointless and will go nowhere.
Focuses too much on the small stuff, bad pacing.
This was just dumb. Another day, another wacky cartoon series that will end in a three month period on Newgrounds. There's no real pacing to your comedy, either. Dialog feels broken and out of place, doesn't have any rhythm whatsoever.
I love funny stuff, but this makes me and others feel ashamed of our efforts to make stuff actually laughable.
No, I don't have a Daily Feature, but I do know what I'm talking about, so do a few others. I have read your replies to some of the lower rated reviews, and you don't actually address their claims. You just brag "Hmph. Where's YOUR daily feature? Why don't YOU do something?" This is the argument people use when they are stubborn.
Even if a majority of people agree with you and gave your movie the rating that it did, so what? That's the Newgrounds community alone, and no offense, but a lot of users are dipshits. This means that the ones who actually do know what they're talking about are seen as "assholes", or "jealous".
I don't even know where I should give constructive criticism, I don't even know if you'd listen.
JunkFoodKing responds:
Thank you for your review, and for pointing out the flaws in my replies. (Yes, I was a jerk.)
I guess I got caught up in the moment, thinking I finally made something good. But, obviously, a lot of users on here are stupid, I agree. They're idiots.
All in all, I'm just starting out with the whole "normal" cartoon thing. My other cartoons (for the most part) are either silent or music videos, so writing my own scripts is a bit new to me, and I'm sure that I'll improve over time.
Anyway, thanks for the constructive criticism. I'll work on some of those things in episode 2. Also, I'm glad to see you did your homework.
If you want to, send your constructive criticism to me via PM. I'm willing to listen.