Reviews for Alex Seryoua: Episode I

[kingie]

Was OK need work..

well basically pretty good.. the storytelling need some work most of the scenes jump by way too fast..
Character animation could use some training.. you only give them 4 limbs while technically you need to give them more.. give the limbs some more layers if you understand.. ^^ and the characters needs some more work on the faces.. the aliens werent even moving anything else than their Insect things when they made a noise.. try to add some more.. ;)

but overall looks good the drawings are awesome and the layers you added on the faces are looking great keep em' comin' but try and practice on what i've mentioned... k? :D

[zenblade]

How Cool!

Keep Those Episodes Coming!!!

[LionHeadtm]

Not bad, buuuut -

Can you say 'Cloverfield'? haha. not bad, but it was moving a little too much. Graphics need to be smoother and more beleivable. Other than that, not bad.

danomano65 responds:

teehee

[IKillChumps]

Its Cool

Its cool but why did the aliens give her a suit that could defend her from their weapons and shoot them back I hope thats answered in the next episode.

[mageman7]

ok heres the dealio...

I liked it. Over all it was a great flash and it had a lot of great concepts woven into it. You need to watch out for one thing though. You were going Cloverfield on us with the shaking camera. While it is not necessarily a bad thing, it can be for someone who gets squeamish very easily. One of my friends told me that when she watched Cloverfield she felt very sick to her stomach. You may not need to watch out for that since your flash is different to Cloverfield in that it is a lot smaller in screen size and sound affects but you may want to tone it down a tad. Not a whole lot, but a tad. Good work though.