A great show of transition between flash. Why I gave it a 4? Well to be honest, The plot was simply to blunt and would need at least 2 views to fully comprehend what your true intentions (for the plot) were. All in all, if was a valiant effort that managed stupendously well in comparison to others in drawing style, the last scene, and the crystal-clearness and other outstanding factors.
Second opinion : 4.5/5 = 9