Give it a quick listen, real quick...
Hell yeah, got a real good sound going on here. Got my head bobbing and shit. I like it, quite a bit. Got a great sounding beat, almost like it was made in a cave. I really like those claves.
But I will say, I don't really like the 'is it a crime' part. It slows down, and starts to sound like a love song, rather than a tune that could have a bad ass rhyme on it. Fuck, I wish I could rap, I'd make something dope to put in with this track.
It's great man. Couldn't use much improvement, at all.
Drop me a review sometime