This is good!
What's good in your flash :
-The perspective of a good story
-Nice theme and a great use of it
-The choice of real or lolcat subtitles (haha!)
What could be improved :
-More use of music (Your trailer was great, it had music) like during transtition scenes or just very soft background music
-Better backgrounds (I think it would be a great addition to your flash if they looked just a little better)
-Release of other episodes and faster! :P
This will probably be a really good serie. Don't mind the haters. Keep up the work and I can't wait to see if your flash skill improves even more as the episodes advance.