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Reviews for "[fishes]"

a moody, interesting piece of work

I enjoy this piece for its atmosphere, as you said, but not necessarily its message. i spend a lot of time thinking about things such as the ultimate meaning of life, and in my opinion it really comes down to the fact that despite the clockwork layout that controls our lives in some ways, there is no grand, greater purpose (unless you find religion, in which case i envy you for being able to believe in something so illogical, because it does give you some sort of goal.) so really besides religion life is about being happy as often as you can, and this film leaves out all those thing people do that make every day somehow unique, even in a minute way. like talking with someone you dont normally, or seeing a shocking sight. another step backward makes you realize that there are always plenty of larger-scale fluctuations that drastically change several lives every day. a car accident, a 'generous' atm, a diagnosed illness, a big boom in a small company. the big picture (using the term "big" loosely) is always changing. and taking a farther step back its easy to see how secluded you are, in some little town somewhere, finding nothing exciting or new in your own life, no drastic changes or winding path, you probly feel very much like a fish in a sea. but first look at the rest of america. then at canada, mexico, then the rest of the world, and how your anthill life is just one piece of the capitalist system of living, and has very little global relevance. so while im sure there are people who very much identify with this, its not exactly the definition of life. but none of this means im insulted or annoyed at you or your flash for this point of view, its just less universal than you portray it to be. despite all of that, its a very mixed-media well planned flash with a very nice combination of somewhat droning, but enjoyable music. the foggy video and the poorly sketched animation combine for a nice small-town blues feeling, which is really where this flash seems to land. i enjoyed it, as you seem to have enjoyed making it, and i really do like your style. not to mention im madly in love with experimental stuff. please do make more stuff like this, but id like to see a more thought-out message in a flash of yours, one that takes a bit to figure out, and really says something that people are likely to not have thought of. nice work overall.

notorious responds:

wow you're pretty damn smart for writing all of that

also i like your approach towards religion lmao

you wrote a lot and it's hard just to grasp quite everything you said first time reading, but i do get your point. I know we've got tons of different cultures, traditions, etc. I really just intended this to set a message, and to be memorable.

Thanks for the good review!

mindscape of a nihilst in the making

intelligent and poetic while not trying to force the 'soul' of the work onto the viewer. full feature film however will never be as strong when deliverd in this type of format and may even become boring.

some backgrounds become repetitive.
inksplatter on background make a word hard to read.
onionskinned animation not really working on the human contours.(silhouet like figures).

Very refreshing content when looking at other submissions at newgrounds.

xcuse me for my bad english.

notorious responds:

full feature film won't be like this, this may be in the feature film, but there will be little animation besides it.

Great atmosphere

Another provocative and interesting animation. This one is a "day in the life" of a teen who seems tired of the daily grind and imagines that all of life is a daily circuitous grind. The next step would be the introduction of something that disturbs the routine, whether self-generated or coming from an outside force. Realization can be beautiful or it can be a bitch.

Very interesting.

All in all, very interesting. Very pessimistic undertones, too. Too often do we see optimistic 'life is good' stuff, and this was a pleasant change. Loved your style, but, I do agree that the poetry was a tad pretentious.

Oh, and forgive me, I can't resist.
In Soviet Russia, the options choose you.

Thoughts

The animations were all very well done and connected smoothly, but the message in poetry was a little hard to grasp.