wow
i made an account just to review this!
this was really good in my opinion. your aim to create an atmosphere definitely hit the mark.
was there any reason you chose fish? i think that it has a psychological meaning (from Jung) related to jesus or god. i first thought you might have meant that everything is important.
anyways, keep up the great work!
hey i love it when people get different interpretations from my work.
The fish were supposed to represent the similarity in activities, mindlessness, just stuff we do in general, and how there are so many.
Reminiscent of Alanthebox.
I'm not one to leave reviews, just curious as to whether or not you knew fishes isn't actually a word. Vibrant.
lol thanks for the review, i know it's fish in plural i just kind of liked that variation.
Unique
Unique is probably the best word to describe this. I enjoyed watching this due to how it had some real meaning to it. We are like fish in the sea because there are so many of us on Earth, and we are all doing similar things.
tru dat!
That's sure worked for me...
"...is a collection of imagery, film and music to build an intense atmosphere..."
That's sure worked for me, I found it really immersive with many deep different feelings. I found it fantastic but like all the art work this depend a lot on the person is watching, for some other this cold mean nothing.
Why don't you show your work in some short film competition or festival I'm sure you've some good chance, I'm not speaking about the technical part but for wich concern the artistic part, that in my opinion is very good, i'm say good not like thing you can find usually on the net but like a professional work.
Just some advice that I think could improve the movie...
1- Put a "Play" and a "Pause" button.
2- Increase the volume of the music, it's my pc or is very very low.
3- Use some more soft-edge fonts for the writing or better different ones that match with a particular part of the movie, this would improve a lot the feeling expressing of the writings.
4- Some time the animation on the background have too much bright and contrast, I know that that is the effect that you would obtain but sometime it's hard to see even something.
Thanks, what I really plan on doing is moving away from the internet more to a film-fest like environment.
The volume on the music, especially near the end is actually quite loud. It might be your PC.
Thanks for the helpful review, i take note of all of this kind of stuff.
wow
this is an awsome piece of art, i can tell you put a lot of work into it, i look forward to seeing much more!!!
might be awhile but if you're up for the wait i have some great stuff planned!!