not bad not bad.
It was okay, some of the wording could have been refined to have more feeling/depth in my opinion and you failed to kind of, "create a tie" with the viewer if u ask me. other than that it was good, the text at times seemed a bit fast, i am aware that it wasn't too fast to be read but it was too fast to be read if you wanted to fully capture the animation/still/video that was in its background.
oh and somebody said they were wondering why it was called "fishes" then they figured it out in the end! good on you i kind of agree but uhh.. i still dont get why its called Fishes and not Fish. >_< yar, the plural of fish is fish xD
anyways, good stuff lad