it was good...
it was good, but.. needs improvement. you raelly must add something more than just a loop. make a thing that will continue teh song, and will match with it, like in teh start, i liked it! and make it so, that an adventure is going on here, or at least add something more to it, it must not be just a loop. it must be... a music vid? i dont know, but you must add more, maybe strawberry clock dancing?