beautiful
It's a shame how much damage we do to the forests each year. I can see you put a lot of effort into this, and it shows. And unlike many submissions on this site, this one has a message. Good job, and keep it up. :)
Reviews for "why do you cry"
Jestercap13 responds:
hey thanx yeah the forest we cant froget them i live in an urban envoriment but even then when i go to a forest i can feel its life and its aura and thanx i will keep it up i just need an idea lol
well done
i liked all of your animation but i would have let the story say the message, and cut the last part. i do agree with you thow.
Jestercap13 responds:
yeah i didnt like the last part but i couldnt think of what else to do lol oh well
not bad
good visuals. I would've liked some more movement, but it was ok. I didn't get the message until you spelled it out in the end. It just wasn't very obvious.
the text in the end was very dark, hard to read, and didn't run smoothly. It looked thrown together and too informal like you were just talking. Needs a more professional appeal, but overall it was an alright project. nice job
Jestercap13 responds:
thanx yeah im not so keen on movement but whatever and the message i couldnt think of ways of showing whith out telling and have it fit the story but oh well
touching
nice video plus great little commentary on an environmental issue
Jestercap13 responds:
thanx yeah we cant forget them
sorry
The music was cheesy and it didnt really make sense. Im fairly pro-environment, but this flash didnt do it for me. It was very short and to be honest not all that creative.