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Reviews for "Ascendence"

Not bad!

For a FBF movie, this was pretty good. I like your style; it has much potential. Keep working on movie elements (i.e. scene transitions, background, etc.) and your animations will improve. Good job!

Wow.

This is amazing.
It really is.
some effects do not fit with the coloring of the animation, (those with gradiant)
but it is really good.
Keep improving your drawing skills and stuff like this would be even better.
It's and outstanding job for being your first submission
5/5

Preeeetty good, good sir

hatever your reason for the buttons, I thought they were definitely a great idea. It was pretty cut-to-the-chase and the story was definitely easy to follow. I even think it made me gain interest to see the next part. Not sure how to explain it exactly. Can't say I was crazy about all the songs you used, but the action had some pretty cool moments. I feel like it wasn't as fluid as I would've liked, kinda choppy, but the only way to fix that easily is to speed it up, but then the music would be off. I thought it was a pretty good flash, kept my attention and all... my only serious gripe is that the story had cliche all over it. The upside on that is that people are immediately familiar with it and are there for the fireworks. Keep cranking them out though.

fell short

the beginning and end of the movie were good for the quality of drawing, but the middle just felt lazy, like you were showing the basic frame of what you were going to make. Like I was watching a story board. The animation was smooth, but the quality felt cheep. Over all good story line, fun movie to watch.

bluecameraman responds:

I'll keep that in mind, thanks for the review.

cool!

Really nice video for your first submission!
Keep up the good work!