Neat Storyline
I love the storyline, the costume & when u using the First-Person view. But the graphic/art need more works.
I'm not judging your artistic value, just try to make it better character design. Oh, AND THE BACKGROUND TOO!
Do this, you'll receive a 4 vote.
But for now, I give u 3/5 & 6/10.
Cheers!
P.S: There's some typo too. (E.G: Planat, CORRECTION: Planet)
ok i will improve on the backround design and animation and character design and my spelling LOL.but thanks for the review=) and i am glad you liked it.
Not too shabby
Good job. this was a nice flash. not great, but then there have been alot worse ones. keep it up.
thanks a lot =)
ok animation
First off, your animation was ok. It still needed improvement but if that was your third animation, it was pretty good. I had a problem with the length of the animation. You should make them longer because you can then let the animation become a story instead of just being an animation.
ok will do and thanks for the review=)glad you liked it=)